Great! :) I love it! Good idea and excellent execution.
My favorite line is definitely: "She wasn’t that altruistic." lol

Wow! Very moving story! I really enjoyed it! Very deep!

Great story. I always wanted more from that scene. You gave it to me, thanks.

I like this a lot! You could add on to it...make it AU from here. I think it would be really interesting.:-D

Good work Mex!! That was good writing I don't think I would have changed anything on that! I do wish they had written the script differently poor Jordan. Thanks for posting this was a great surprise =)... Hugs from Kat x x x