Ah, a Christian take on Star Wars. Nice, but a bit too short. It would be better if there was more. Perhaps you could do an exposition of each tenet, or maybe even model this "code" after the fruit of the Spirit.

By the way, phantom-jedi1, are you a born-again Christian? If you are, thank you, brother. If not, well, I think you'll still like my fanfic 'The Gospel of the Chosen One'. Go check it out. Thanks.

A lovely little piece, great for day-to-day reminders of our faith.

Very nice. I got it.

^^ good job. I realy like this! A jedi code for Christians...I never would have thought of it.
from a believer in Christ - thank you!

Wow, I'm very impressed. I never thought to incorporate the fruits of the Spirit with the Jedi code, but it makes sense, haha. Very cool!

Thsi was good. I noticed your theme after it was explained.

P.S.
If you give me permission, I'd be positing it on my deviantART profile.

Love it! Thanks a bunch! Okay if I repost? I will give you credit, and provide a link back to this.

Cool code! You were brave to put it up here. There is NO death, there is Christ! Amen!

nice :)

From one Star Wars fan to another, the Force is clearly with you.

From one writer to another, well done.

From one poet to another, nice adaptation.

From one believer to another, thank you.

VFA