That was intense! Love how Law 'claimed' Milo with that scar of his initals. Very 'Law-like'. You have the characters down. I like how you write, very descriptive of each characters thoughts and actions. I like how proud and smug Law seems to be toward his sadistic 'relationship' with Milo. It's interesting how Dova just sit's back and doesn't interfere for fear of Law's unstable reaction. I'm anxiously awaiting more small tales with these characters included. May I suggest a situation/storyline? I've always wondered how much more violent and unpredictable could Law get if he'd gotten completely loaded on alcohol and went off on Milo? How intense would that be? I think I'd be awesome and deserving of an 'M' rating. Please write it if ya can. Thanks.

--Alex.