Aww! This story is really cute and good! Did they ever have kds in the end?

I usually don't review all the stories I read, but this one -- I just couldn't resist.
You have a phenomenal sense of humor in your writing. I read this story and laughed out loud so many times -- my neighbors probably think I've gone mad.
Thank you for this -- I needed a good read, and the laughter really made my day!

I loved your story. Adorable!

OK that had me in tears I was laughhing so hard, if only holidays were that enterataining in my house.. OH I could only wish..xoxoxo

Okay, that chapter was awesome. I'm really sad that this story was only two chapters :(

I loved it!

Sorry you didn't get to meet your own version of Edward, but at least you got inspiration for this awesome little number.

Can't wait to read about what happens next! Thanks for sharing this with us.

you are great!!
this was lovely, hilarious, awesome,, i love it!
thank you =)

Aw! this was so good! i loved it! i love how they got locked in the closet! and charlies explanation...i was crying i was laughing so hard! funny funny funny!

SWEET

Emmett is fucking hilarious, I love him.
Poor Edward having to see his naked ass. LMAO
I love Alice too, she's great.
James creeped me right out NEGL.
I love that Bella is the friend Alice invited to dinner.
Shoving them in a closet, classic, and also brilliant.
LMAO @ Emmett interrupting the kiss and throwing condoms at them. Classic Emmett.
I was nearly in tears from Charlie's story about what happened, that's hilarious.
NGL, that last line almost made me cry.. LOL
Beautiful story, thanks for sharing.

Really cool history! you are a great writer! the history is funny and romantic... I couldn't stop reading...

Hilarious! And here I thought my family was nuts...

I loved it.

Hilarious xD
Barely ever stopped laughing here xD