Another great chapter! I'm getting worried, are they going to make it, or not?

this is getting very very interesting! wondering how it will go on...
great chapter!

I enjoyed the chapter and look forward to reading how Ian and John get out of trouble.

ooh, this starts to explain a lot :D great chapter.

curiouser and curiouser. and I'm one chapter behind. oops.

An enjoyable chapter to read, we now have an idea who the pregnant woman was that was rescued.I look forward to more.

Genii? I should have known, your gonna bring those bastards into this! Can't wait for more!

o, an update! more, please.
always anxious to read another campers chapter

Ah, those aliens with the crystal skull thing. Nice addition and good read!

THis guy is getting really annoying. Can Ronon shoot him already?

They're going in! Update soon!

This is really tense. I'm getting nervious and really not liking that cliffy!

This is getting really interesting! I want to read more!!

only Ian and his team could find such a mystery. Can't wait to find out who this daughter is and where she went. Please update.

Great chapter!There is just one thing,Oh how I deeply dislike cliffhangers!And you do them so well!I look forward to the next installment.