well...
to others...its great...but to me...
i dun think is that great...
if u read some other BK or KK fanfic...they wrote a lot of stuff that discribes what they're feeling...
its obvious ur title and summary is BK fanfic...
and Battousai should have the cold feeling...yours is like so...dull...and i dun have any feeling when reading ur fanfic...try to read some other BK story if u wanna mastered it...
sry if i burst ur bubbles...
i'm usually a person who REALLY gives opinion for fanfics...my friends usually let me read and ask opinion from me after they finished writing their fanfic
i hope u like my review...try to work harder...

from,
fanfic judge( muahaha!juz jokking )

Oh pls,preety pls at least finish this fic...or let someone,anybody to do it.Pls,pretty pls...I just love this fic...

So Cute! lol

I just got to chapter nine... DAMN YOU!

YES! it's not tuberculosis! NO! I'm sinking again!

I'm sinking! I'm sinking!

this is getting REALLY fluffy! I'm sinking in the fluff!

Shortm sweet, fluffy, and you ruined it!

*glare* what? No fighting to get out? I've been to Kyoto! It's big ya, but back then it was substancially smaller! 30 soldiars and not ONE saw them?! I don't think so! Were'e the fighting to escape, the fire, what did Kauru do?! AH!

this is cool

... this is kinda stupid... hehehe.. But I like it!!

Sad that you aren't updating.

u sure it's just friendship or is it more? haha

This story has lots of potential! Sad to hear that you've lost inspiration, but that's totally understandable. I least I didn't have to read about Kenshin and Kaoru dying.

Yes,Yes. I know I'm incredibly late, but I just want to say what an awsome story this is. It's sad to see such a good story just end like that. Anyway great fic, very sweet.