Well this chapter actually got better. So I'd have to say I take back my last comment. Go ahead and finish it since a story left unfinished is a sad story. Good job on that last chapter.

Now this story is very rushed. I'd say redo it or create a new one. A little thing I go by when doing up a story on here. Have at least 3 pages Min on Microsoft Word. Plus double check your work and such.

So the newest story I'd say continue on with that one but scrape this one. Keep the ideas though and add them into the newest story.

A very good story, and I hope to hear more very very soon! And I am really enthralled with the story, very original.

Love this story so far!!
Keep the chapters coming :D

So wonderful to see you again, my dearest friend. It has truly been a long long time, but I never gave up hope that you would finish what you have begun.

To sum up my thoughts about part IV, it is amazing like all of your works have been. I would not expect anything less from a truly talented writer. I can only begin to imagine what will come next, but regardless of what does, I know it will be fantastic.

I don't suppose you know about the Eureka Seven Movie DVD that is going to be released in Japan on June 25? The movie has done extraordinarily well in Japan since its release in April and there are rumors that a fansub group has a copy of the movie and is already looking for a translator. When it hits the internet, there will undoubtedly be a wave of new fanfics, new fanart, new amvs, new everything, but there is one thing that won't change: the memories of a truly awe-inspiring series.

It is wonderful to have you back and perhaps I should give you some news too: I am editing my fanfics for an original publication. :) I have already prepared different names and some changes in the plot lines, which I will discuss with you in a PM.

Once again, it is truly great to see an old face and to see that you are still writing so I will send you a PM to update you about everything that has happened. Once again, great chapter and good to have you back.

I remain as ever your own,
Jordan

Oh, wow hun! I love how Eureka is dressed for the wedding. It gives a bit of a fantasy feel~ I love it! Totally jealous of your writing. I will never be as good as you. xP! Regardless, I will continue to read your stories as long as you write them, because they are simply mind numbing to me and make me smile and some times giggle. :3 Please continue with what you do! I am 100% behind you all the way!