Sigh. Great story, just hope that you will pick this tory up again.

Poor dawn... Wow I'm happy I get an update of something! I just got back from my uncles for 5 days! Gosh that was hell -_- sitting down with(screaming little 7 year old) Anyways great job ;)

omg! cuss words! .:filters:.

8D

Wow, the ending was just shocking. Uncle...wow...

XD I still get the Deliuses mixed up u.u;; but eh...

I can't wait to hear more about dawn x3

There were a few mistakes and a few things that could be fixed but I know you're limited on time b overall: awesome!

Wow this is great 3 updates when I come back! sorry I din't review on the others I got busted by my parents... About school lol they got my report card and freaked out that I failed french, but half my class failed not just me and I was banned from the PC T.T

omg that happened so fast! XD

they them they them them lool

can't wait to read more :3

DUN DUN DUN

'She resumed scrubbing various unidentifiable masses of beast filth off her limbs.' HA HA HA ew XDD

Once again, a good chapter.

O.O Woah, Devil! Gah, I'm "itching" (what a funny way to put it) to know about Dawn and Pins and what happened between them in the past .

Nice im going to enjoy this too D

O.O Omg a death...

heheheh...Dawn's "love interest" YUSH!

P Interesting.

this chapter was pretty short XD

sequeel :O

that summary... about dawn... .:cough:.

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FINE!

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XD ok, That was an interesting start. So -poke- hurry up and write more! . I really really really wanna see what happens when Dawn is being courted.