Finally got to catch up, great three chapters. It was great seeing more of Jared, chapters with him seem to be getting few and far between. Same with Artemus, though he at least gets mentioned more often.

typo in chapter 43:

"Yet her she stood" should be "Yet here she stood"

Can't wait for more!

oh, the endings definitely full of suspense. God, i wish i could write as good as you, but all my stories on here are rubbish. Anyways, keep up the awesome work, and i can't wait to see what happens next : )

P.S: Just out of curiosity, does George appear in any upcoming chapters? - He's my favourite character in case you didn't gather that already lol.

Aha! Comlications--the beginning of a love triangle? Anyway, this is getting VERY interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW, what's Jared up to? He seems to have gotten lost in the mix.

Watching the Eagles-Bears game in the background. Score is 10-12, but the Eagles kept the Bears from scoring on the drive. Hope the Eagles win. I love the Bears about as much as you love te Cowpukes.

Have a great week.

I'm not big on hockey, but you wrote the chapter well enough that I could follow it and picture what was going on. For me, it was a bit dragged out, but then I'm not into hockey. All in all, it was a good chapter. I liked the way you didn't push Jimmy into the Bruins right away, but let him go to minors. That was a lot more realistic. BTW, you have 'coral' when I think you meant 'corral' in one of the try-out paragraphs. Other than that, it was a good chapter.

I do hope the Eagles beat the Bears. I can't stand those arrogant jerks. Been turned off on the Bears since McMahon was QB there. I had fits when the Saints signed Ditka as coach. That was a disaster of a season! And about those Saints! Nobody down here can believe it. You should see the crowds waiting at the airport to welcome them back from road games! If those guys make it to the Super Bowl this city is going to go berserk, and if they win, well I think there will be the traffic jam from hell at the airport and the French Quarter will be packed.

Hav e a great week.

awesome chapter. Ha, finally something good happened to Jimmy. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the fantastic work : D

Wow, very emotional chapter. Poor jared. Keep up the awesome work : D

Wow, sorry for the Bronski family. I suppose it's inevitable that Jimmy fels guilty. And it couldn't be easy to show respect to a superior who proved himself a coward.

Well, I can fully sympathize with Rosa for her being sad because Jared is so far away. When I came to study here, ten years ago, I really missed my little monster of a brother, for he's been a part of my life since I was five. He was just always there.

Mr Rand is getting worse, I think. When is he going to start snatching the girls straight from the cradle?! I would have enoyed seeing him arrested, byt stupid Jimmy wouldn't let them.

And I honestly think that Rosa is right, he should stop with the pity fest a;ready. Well, it's easier said than done...

Good chapter. I found it hard to believe that Jimmy would completely desert the wizarding world, but George's reaction was spot on. I'm curious to see what happens next.

Sorry 'bouth the Eagles' los last weekend, but can you believe the Saints?! 8-0!! The city is going ballistic, especially after the dude from Sports Illustrated predicted Saintsv. Steelers in the Super Bowl. I just hope he didn't "put the mouth" on us! If you're superstitious, that will definitely jinx you. For years everyone thought the reason the Saints couldn't make it all the way was the "Superdome Curse." The Dome was built over the old Girod Street Cemetery, so everyone said the Saints would be cursed playing there. Actually, they sucked even when they were playing at the old Tulane University (Sugar Bowl) Stadium. Maybe this year we have a really special team. I know the QB isn't the end-all for the team, but Drew Brees has really brought them together. We don't have a bunch of prima donnas like in the past. They play as a team, and give one another credit for what they've accomplished. Just hope this weekend makes it 9-0. Good luck to the Eagles.
I know they're having a rough season.

Anyhow, have a great weekend.

Intense two chapters. I hope Jimmy realizes soon enough that running away from the wizarding world, and abandoning his friends, isn't the smartest choice. And hope things start getting better for all of them soon.

One note for chapter 39: Mrs. Weasley's eyes are just a plain brown. It's mentioned in Deathly Hallows that she and Ginny have the same eye color, and Ginny is described with brown eyes. Hazel is more of a green-brown color.

Wow you're such an amazing talented writer. I loved the speech, and the ending part. It's so realistic, you get the characters and emotions dead on. Poor George, you could definitely feel his pain, and every other characters. Keep up the awesome work, and I can't wait to read your next one ^_^

Oh my gosh, the story was hialrious. And I loved the whole Prince Jeter thing. So funny and true . . .

Squid

It's so sad that Jared's father still hadn't even started to overcome the loss. And Jared isn't much better either. Who knows, maybe Thailand will be the best place for him at the moment - new place, no memories, nasty surprises to keep him occupied, since I know what you love to do to your characters...

It seems to me that they'll need much more time to recover from the war than they spent fighting in it. So sad, but also so true. This chapter felt especially real, with the mix of joy, pride, grief, and Harry Potter obsession in the USA. So sad for Rosa.

I love what you have been doing with the characters in the post war, even if you did break up George/Rosa :(

Anyway I haven't really been able to review lately but I just wanted to let you know that I love what you are doing. I think it's all very realistic and I am enjoying reading bout how Jimmy, Jared, Rosa and Artimus are dealing with their lives after the war. Great job.