Wow you're such an amazing talented writer. I loved the speech, and the ending part. It's so realistic, you get the characters and emotions dead on. Poor George, you could definitely feel his pain, and every other characters. Keep up the awesome work, and I can't wait to read your next one ^_^

Oh my gosh, the story was hialrious. And I loved the whole Prince Jeter thing. So funny and true . . .

Squid

It's so sad that Jared's father still hadn't even started to overcome the loss. And Jared isn't much better either. Who knows, maybe Thailand will be the best place for him at the moment - new place, no memories, nasty surprises to keep him occupied, since I know what you love to do to your characters...

It seems to me that they'll need much more time to recover from the war than they spent fighting in it. So sad, but also so true. This chapter felt especially real, with the mix of joy, pride, grief, and Harry Potter obsession in the USA. So sad for Rosa.

I love what you have been doing with the characters in the post war, even if you did break up George/Rosa :(

Anyway I haven't really been able to review lately but I just wanted to let you know that I love what you are doing. I think it's all very realistic and I am enjoying reading bout how Jimmy, Jared, Rosa and Artimus are dealing with their lives after the war. Great job.

So sad about Hector. And Jimmy's so good with the kids.

Good chapter, although I was ready to lynch you for ending it where you did. Guess I'll have to hang in to hear Jimmy's speech. BTW, we know he ends up with Mireet, but when is he going to stop being a total a** in the matter? Damn, but the man's got the intelligence of a blast-ended skrewt!

Hope you get the next chapter up soon. Have a great week.

So cool that Artimus became friends with them! And Jimmy was so good with the kids.

Great chapter. Uber suspenseful.

Squid

Wow, you have no idea how much I loved this. It made me giddy reading it. I think it is such a great idea. And, oh my gosh, everything you came up with is so creative! The substitutes for all the stuff in Britain, like Diagon Alley and whatnot.

Oh, and I love Jimmy's love of sports. Even if the Lakers are totally cooler than the Celtics :)

So, I'll be reviewing a lot, if not every chapter. I like to review.

And 39 chapters aalready! I better crack down on this story, huh?

Can't wait to see where this goes!

Squid

*sob* such a sad chapter. Good job : ) Fred was one of my favourite characters though, i hate the fact that he dies : (
Will you have a scene with Rosa and George soon? Cos that confrontation would certainly be, interesting. Keep up the awesome work : D

Aha! The plot thickens! This should be interesting,--Jimmy playing pro hockey. Maybe he can work out some of the anger and angst & get over all the sturm und drang crap. The twist with the Bronski family was really an unexpected one. Good move with that one.

Well, we're all waiting for Monday night in N.O. As someone e-mailed me, the Saints tamed a Lion, shot down an Eagle, devoured a Buffalo, landed a Jet, killed a Giant, and caught a Dolphin. On Monday, they're gonna fry a Falcon!

No one here can believe what a phenomenal season we're having.. We're praying to go all the way, but then we remember the seasons when we thought we were going to go all the way but got shot down in the play-offs (if we got THAT far!). But then we didn't have Brees, Colston, Shockey, Fujita & the rest of the gang. we have now. The best part of it is that the team for once has great players, but no "prima donnas' like in the past. These guys actually realize how important it is to work together as a team.

Well, here's wishing good luck to the Eagles. Have a great weekend and a safe Halloween.

Good chapter. Great to see Jimmy's finding a distraction in hockey, and I hope that works out for him, but I doubt he'll be able to stay completely away from the Wizarding World very long. No matter how much he seems to want to get away from it all, I seriously doubt he'll completely abandon his friends.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is one of the best chapters you've done. It captures the emotions well, and carries the reader along without any gap in the picture. It plays as though the reader could picture the whole thing in his mind. Excellent job!

Well, I just hope the Saints can whoopass on Miami this weekend. It would be fantastic to see them go all the way. They don't seem to be resting on their laurels, and are trying hard to anticipate Miami's wildcat ways. Good luck to the Cards, too. I know you'd love to see them stop Eli & Co. As for the Eagles, here's hoping they get back on their game this week. I still say you need to send out a pitbull to bite Vick's butt every time he screws up. For that matter, sic the dogs on McNabb & the rest of the team, too. Might give 'em some incentive (hehehe!).

Have a great weekend.

Great chapter. I'm not sure I could eat in a restaurant that had a unicorn running around under my feet, though. I'd be afraid of stepping on it, whether it was just a picture in a carpet or not.

And hopefully things will start looking up for everyone soon. I mean, Artimus seems to be getting back to his feet relatively well so far. Now there's just Rosa, Jimmy, and Jared, and their families.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Depressing. Just trying not to get hurt is no way to live. I know that they are going to make it, but it's still sad.