Great chapter. Please update.

Sweet chapter. Please update.

Well, I'm glad to see you've updated this story! It's very sweet. I was a bit disappointed by "Ariel's Beginning", but I love what you've written here! I love stories about family bonding, and I love stories about people striving to remember their forgotten pasts. It adds a touch of mystery and suspense. It's sad that Ariel has such a hard time remembering, and that she's getting such awful headaches. I know how terrible pain can be.

I love how you've written the relationship between Ariel and her sisters. It goes that one step further than the movie suggested, showing each one as a unique and caring individual.
Your phrasing throughout this story is simple yet it also does a wonderful job conveying the characters emotions.
Awesome job.

Please update.

This is so sweet! I really like it! Please update!

With much laughter, love, and smiles,
Spirit of the Earth =)

I was a bit disappointed by "Ariel's Beginning", but I did love that scene where Triton held Ariel after she had fallen, and I do like this story. It's very touching. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for this one!

Please update. Will Ariel regain her memories?