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sparkling-Ryuichi Sakuma
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
Ehehehe
Live For You
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
It's so sad. she can just say no at the wedding, she's too kind. maybe they'll get divorced or something...and she'll marry Natsume.
etCheL
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
a very very very sad story!
But I didnt cry..hm...Iwonder why...?
...

While i figure out why I didnt cry, please keep on writing more beautiful stories...!

keep up the good work!

take care now!

_etCheL_
Riella S.
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Couldn't she just decline? It's not like they were already married and Natsume came back all of a sudden for her, to tell her he had always loved her. There's still a chance, right? Right?! ><
RandomChara
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
That was an absolutely beautiful story. I love these kinds of stories. As much as I love happy endings, I love angsty, tragedy type stories better.
keripuda
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
aww...
that was really sad *sobs*...
!!
*sigh* why did it turned out like that??

_*cries*_

baka MIKAN. baka NATSUME. Really.
Life is so unfair.
simplicity's control
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
Omigawd.
That was so sad...
i know i'm stating the obvious by saying stuff like it was sad...
but i cant help it.
i cant believe she was going to marry NOGI!
of all people.
i cried so hard...well maybe not that hard
>_< but i still cried...

~
but it was still a nicely written story.
luna cherFer
2009-06-14 . chapter 1
this is heartbreaking.

sigh.

that's why i do not like weddings, it's as if they aren't real..(i think i'm losing it.)

haha..it was good but painful for both of them..to natsume and mikan.

another sigh.

WRITE ON!
Anonymous
2009-06-14 . chapter 1
No! No! That is not how a Natsume-Mikan is supposed to end!(too much drama for my heart) Though i can't say it was horrible or bad because it was great! It needs a sequel where Natsume and Mikan finally get together and everyone is happy!
P.S. Don't think this is a flame because your work is outstanding! The writting was so good that it was better than anyword I can think of.
misa.chin
2009-06-14 . chapter 1
So sad . I love it !
Fate
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
oh geez...lol, don't be so down, guys~there's still divorce!
...okay, so not the 'right' thing to do, but hey, hope is hope right?

but damn, that was just..it was simple but it was more sorrow filled than i'd have expected..

keep writng^^
Aki Eschirott
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
Aww~ The ending was bittersweet. I'm a sucker for happy endings but that doesn't mean I don't like tear-jerker endings like this. LMAO. God, that was an awesome one-shot. Well anyways... Natsume's still single so does that mean fangirls still have a chance? XD
LMAO. Awesome shot Keiko-san :D

Aki
Sitting in the Silence
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
waah!!
keiko-chaan!! why? why? why? whhyy??

good thing its just a one-shot!
ahahah. okay, i'm absolutely a fan of the NMR triangle,
buut. xD i can't imagine ruka getting married to mikan.. it's soo, uhm.. weird? ahahah... :))

anyways, this is really good.. and it matches the month of june...
and yess, it is saad. :( why? keiko-chaan whyy? x))

keep it upp..
btw, waa. i got addicted to gud gurls go baad. s'ur fault!!
awoo. luv u ;D

::kd::
Oxymoron Paranoia
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
oh my goodness how heart-breaking!i really loved it!kya!
meeraMELODY
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
...Am I weird for feeling really sorry for Ruka? Great fic though, love to hear more from you~
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