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Kithrin
2009-12-04 . chapter 7
"Shampoo challenged you to a match and you won the match making her your wife by using some half-blind moron that had a thing for your wife as a bludgeon"

doesn't this mean technically mean Mousse beat shampoo? he WAS the one hitting her after all.
Lord Sia
2009-11-28 . chapter 8
Huh. Well, it's original at least (I think so... I'm not sure... Meh), and pretty well-done. The Xian Pu-Ryouga pairing is actually one of the better I know of. While Xian Pu would likely be annoyed by her husband's shyness, they'd still be good for each other, well, if they don't rip each other to pieces first. Um...

Well, it's pretty good, all in all. Kudos for Ryouga's Wrestling style. I don't really take wrestling seriously (it's a pretty good show, true, but to over the top for my taste), but it's definately fun to read!
Shanami
2009-11-20 . chapter 8
So far, I've enjoyed this story, with one minor exception. To me, Ranma just isn't Ranma without his curse. I realize that there's no way that Ranma would ever go to Jusenkyo in this universe, but I still feel the distinct lack of the curse, and all of the problems (and advantages for a relationship with Michiru) in this story.

I'd love to see him cursed by someone bringing Nyannichuan water to Japan, or something like that, and I'm looking forward to the development of Ranma's relationship with Sailor Neptune and the interaction between them and the rest of the scouts.
Salamander Hanzo
2009-11-16 . chapter 8
PIE
Kurt Baros aka The Falcon
2009-11-09 . chapter 8
it was good for a filler chapter i hope that you update soon this one of the better SM / ranma crossovers that read that didnt invole ranma chan or being a yaoi and foe that you have my eternal undieing graditude.
Lady Laran
2009-11-09 . chapter 8
This is not a flame...but you broke up Michiru and Haruka? Those two are timeless and honestly, canon. They weren't xenophobic after Usagi beat them and made them realize that working in a team setting is better than being alone. Especially since they realized if Serenity was getting her hands dirty (when there had never been a Sailor Moon), then they could work with her.

To be honest..I could see Ranma with Ami or even Makoto. Just having a hard time with him with Michiru. The Neptune/Uranus pairing is a huge draw to the SM fans. Uranus strengthens Neptune while Neptune gives her a softer touch.
god of all
2009-11-09 . chapter 8
Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon.
Bobboky
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
very good
Diablo200030002002
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Liekthe latest chapter but disapprove of setsuna's meddling even for a good reason.
Liek to se eti backfire, say they all find out and see theri reactiosn.
Or Haruka finds out and turns to anemey for awhile.
Gogolu
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Getting better and better.
Wharpt
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
OK. Ranma is engaged to Michiru. His cousin is Rei. His 'Auntie' is Setsuna. Will any of the other Senshi become relatives of Ranma?

If I understand this correctly, Nodoka went to jail for her part of the seppuku contract and has been there for nearly 10 years. A little harsh to my thinking.

Do the Kaioh's have any exotic pets, say like warm-water penguins?
Dumbledork
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Great chapter.
firelordeg
2009-11-07 . chapter 8
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please update again a.s.a.l.a.
Innortal
2009-11-07 . chapter 8
Odd twist at the end, but enjoyable.
chm01
2009-11-07 . chapter 8
the alst aprt can't be good. but I have to give you kuddos for the betrothal
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