This broke my heart.
It was beautiful. And just devastating.
The quote at the end is just stunning. So appropriate and right. I love this.

That was beautiful. I teared up at the end, especially after that quote by Hesse. Poor Dumbledore, I wish he could have a happy ending.

'In that same meadow, under that same tree, Dumbledore pushes the blond hair behind Grindelwald’s ear and their lips are touching and they are laughing and they are breathing the same air.' So, so sweet and gentle. I think you really caught how Albus felt about the whole thing, and the fishing scene was so cute. Very nice work.

This nearly made me cry. It did. Poor stupid, besotted Dumbledore...

You did a wonderful job of writing the fight scene, focusing more on Ariana when most writers pay more attention to the duelers.

omg my heart ached T_T

That was simply precious. I started to tear up at the end. The way Dumbledore loves him right from the beginning, its perfect.

that was a lovely insight. I felt just as horrified as Harry did when it happened to Ariana, and seeing Dumbledore's face afterward.. =(

by the way:
"She has fair auburn fair and dreamy blue eyes." I believe this is a typo? (:

Gellert and Albus are always so sweet, I'm sure this one is exactly how it was.

Very touching and intense. I like the idea of Dumbledore showing these emories to Harry, if only because I was so disappointed with him fornot telling Harry anything in the books

i really felt awful for dumbledore.loving someone who hurt u so much, must be torture.
good take on it.

Aich.. There can be no happy endings for Gellert and Albus... So sad.