Loved the last line :')

Tragic and beautiful.

that was lovely.

-zozo

That quote at the end really cinched it.

Oh my God, this is so great! It is incredibly well written, and even though it's so short it really captured me. (And it was so sad. I just wanted to cry reading the last lines.)

You know what? I can't write a good enough review of this. It's just amazing.

This. Is. Perfect.

*stares at the screen solemnly*

i'm really sad.. with Dumbledore's past...

but really... sometimes it takes the worst of happenings... he was such a great man...

Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it.

gosh! this is so gd u can publish it as a side 4 harry potter! its reli canon!

there are no words.

-cries-

beautiful. sad. intriging.

This broke my heart.

It was beautiful. And just devastating.

The quote at the end is just stunning. So appropriate and right. I love this.

That was beautiful. I teared up at the end, especially after that quote by Hesse. Poor Dumbledore, I wish he could have a happy ending.

'In that same meadow, under that same tree, Dumbledore pushes the blond hair behind Grindelwald’s ear and their lips are touching and they are laughing and they are breathing the same air.' So, so sweet and gentle. I think you really caught how Albus felt about the whole thing, and the fishing scene was so cute. Very nice work.

This nearly made me cry. It did. Poor stupid, besotted Dumbledore...

You did a wonderful job of writing the fight scene, focusing more on Ariana when most writers pay more attention to the duelers.

omg my heart ached T_T