Hey, cool story Ethereal Prey. The twisted wish theme is always an intersting plot to deal with and how you managed to make the whole thing fit and in fact explain the events of the show was just ... unexpected and very cool.

Good work. :D

GOOD ENDING! I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT

WHAT THE!

great ending, it was intersting, and it kept me reading, but then the end! it was all wow! COOL!

I loved the surprise twist at the end! Keep writing!