Honestly? One of your weaker works. The beginning drew me in, but... I think it was the lack of ending punctuation that really annoyed me, as well as those lines like "'There are 3 of you' Sinbad", where there isn't even a verb to go with "Sinbad," you know? Also, the verb tense switches in places. However, I must also say that the story itself was great... I thought it was really interesting how you had three Maeves, each one being part of the whole. Awesome concept!