Aw... This is wonderful.

Well written.

LOVE IT! This actually may have gotten me into ShikiEri... never actually thought of the pairing before. Way to go, this was very well written. :} Kudos.

Cute cute. I hope to see more from you.

Lovely. Exactly what Shiki deserves after the game :D

I like your style a lot, those sentences cut short - especially "and wished more than anything in the world- more than her dream to become a famous designer, that she possessed Eri’s beauty, and Shiki realized" : what's missing here means so much. :3

Nice.

Yuri rocks