Just reading this made me open up my window and grab my almost-empty pack. Thanks for reminding me -takes a puff- Not being sarcastic, by the way.

Anyways, this was pretty good. Entertained me.

"He ran his tongue across his teeth, wondering if they were yellow yet."
bahaha so cute<3~ lmfao he's been smoking for like, a week. XD i love how you described stan describing kyle. "It was beautiful."

As soon as I finished reading this, I had to go light a cigarette. That's how good it was.

OMG, this is fantastic! Your qriting is exquisite and your characterization -- OH MY GOD it's just so perfect, and the plot and Kyle being all cute and overprotective and ah, I love it. And I cannot wait for an update!

Haha, I remember in season three they said Stan had asthma. Doesn't that mean smoking would kill him?

I now have an urge to take up smoking, thanks to this little gem.

That aside, I thought the story itself was beautifully written. I hope to read more from you in the near future.

That was... Awesome!
XD

I love how you could turn smoking into a sense of trust and the base of which a relationship *could* have been built on. I like how you involved Kenny, i thought that was funny ^^. Well, i have to say i really love this story, it was written so well.

~MK