Short and sweet and to the point. And yet... and yet it's amazing. Sweet, very in-character beginning and powerful ending. 5 out of 5 stars. Bravo!

Love,

Kat xx

AHH!

Whoa. I was reading this thinking 'Hey this is okay.'

Then I read the last line.

And WOW! Seriously, it turned this whole thing around for me.

Powerful ending!

oh, cool start, more I say, more!

ha ha, so Cabel, so so Cabel, ha ha, it's a great one shot and I love it, so thank you!

PLZ MORE WAKE/FADE!

really good i want more please thats to good to stop right there

really good. will you rite more?

I LOVE THE BOOK SO MUCH

um good start. I'd like to see more, and next time could you make it longer? XP

it was a good five lines!

Ooh, nice!

HOT! Keep writing, you've got a good thing going here! :)

omigosh thats good! It leaves me wanting more, so wright more!)))

Wow. Intriguing!:)