I enjoyed this story! It was very well thought out but put into not too many words, which leaves a good impression on any reader. Really great! I love Time Hollow! P

Time Hollow 4ever!

Now that that's out of the way, I really liked the story, and how narrative it was.

Kori. Karin. Kori. Karin. Kori. Karin. Kori. Karin.

Oh, NOW I get it! Funny!

-StarIlI

P.S. I'm not kidding, it was funny.