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Reviews for: Distractions in the Lower City
SoundSparrow
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
nice story. Like it.
HikaKitsune
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
The concept of this story is quite cute. Usually the theme of the runaway princess is overdone and rather generic, but you handled this well and turned it into something unique. I never really considered Mustadio and Ovelia as a possible pairing, but with the way you wrote them, it's quite believable. I'm surprised that this story doesn't have more reviews. There are no glaring errors that I can spot, and the pacing in this was very even and built up nicely to the end.
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