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Reviews for: Walking On Air
Jillian
2009-06-17 . chapter 3
Well done. The title reminds me of "Believe ir or Not" the theme to "the Greatest American Hero". Was that intentional? I like how you noted the different facets of Mac's relationship with heights.
kittn
2009-06-16 . chapter 3
Very nice! I like the view of the inside of Mac's head. Great!
Kippling
2009-06-13 . chapter 3
OOh! That's right - I forgot Mac's incongruous fear of heights...it does add a bit of extra angst to the widowmaker story that I didn't quite catch before. I love the way a good narrative from the characters' perspective draws you into their emotions...nicely done! and Thanks for bringing that element out, now I have to go back and watch it again...
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