I really hope you continue this. I would like to see where you take it. I like your characterization of all three seekers. I enjoyed the chapter a great deal and I hope you continue.

I love this! Cupcakes for you! Can't wait to see how they 'court' Screamer... -giggles-

*gasp* I never reviewed this? Bad me.
It's awesome (I've been rereading it so that has to say something) and I can't wait for a new chapter.

~HD

This is amazing...I love the tone/perspective you're using to write this. It gives us an interesting look into the seeker trine and definitely explains a lot. I hope that you are going to write more of this! Please...PLEASE?

Please...please tell me you are going to write more. I can't even breathe. I'm think I'm either going to cry or laugh until I do. Poor, poor Starscream...

I love this story, you really need to update. Please

“It was a sometimes comedic, sometimes painful, sometimes strangely sweet courtship, which is, alas, a story for another time”

I do hope you show us just how Skywarp was able to entice TC! That would be interesting ^^. Poor Screamer really needs more love. Hope you update soon, the story is fantastic.

wonderful. I really really like the way this is going.keep it up

Feel a little like a stalker but I cant avoid ya
stories if they just are as good as this one is...
And I hope that this will continue as well ><!

aw, i love it!
poor starscream :( you've got to feel sorry for the guy.
i mean, how many seekers would be lining up for him if not for that wonderful voice?
[(throws self forward.) ME!]
:D totally IC, as well... screamer being hostile makes sense, because you gave him a reason to be so... xD
and silly megs. tsk, tsk.
i felt so sorry for starscream when tc and skywarp didn't see how frustrated he was. :(
also, i love the style of this one- random, i know, but i love all the little comments, like "reader", and how you seem to be there, watching all this. reminds me of lemony snicket, i think.
all i can say is, lucky you :P
i want more! MORE! mwahah!

I hope this is not a one shot cause I would love to read more about how Skywarp and Thundercracker win Starscreams affections :)

this story is awesome. I hope you update soon! poor Starscream he is so abused and he needs lots of love! lol

I'm quite fascinated by this. I'm definitely interested for more. One note though, every time you mention the word 'reader' it jolts said reader out of the flow of the story. It gives it an arrogant, holier-than-thou kind of air to it. Despite it, I'm very interested to see where this is heading.

LDOT

MORE. NOW.

I mean-Please ma'am. May I have some more? <:3

This is really an interesting concept. I hope you continue it. What I really like is the style it's written in, like a spoken story. It seems like legend a mech would tell the sparkling's before bed. Love your style and looking forward to the next chapter.