Even though I haven't seen S7, that was great. I love reading people's thoughts, and you have a read talent for last lines.

Music to my ears! Keep going! I wanna to see a chapter where David explains EVERYTHING!!

I think you should continue this story until Tony sees Jack again.

Great story! Loved seeing it from Tony's view. I think you should write another chapter...from when Tony wakes up and realizes he isn't dead.

Yes, the 'Death' of Tony Almeida.

I love it all of course, as I always do. These are probably my favourite bits though.

"it seems like Jack is winning me over to his way of thinking, and part of me is glad."

"My patience has run thin, and vengeance is on my mind once more.

"He's sad, angry, upset – a whole mosaic of emotion"