I really like it! I loved the song! You really know how to write a lovestaory, speaking of lovestory, can you make a story about the song lovestory? If you have time Shakira? Can you, oh please?!

I like the way Elena and Julie fight, it's like it's so real, keep it up1 Just one question, why'd you review your own story?

I love the music used in the story and the story's great too!

I like your style! And I rwally like they song you used, it brings out the story!

I can feel they sympathy of the story. Good job! Keep writing stories!

Hey! The plot for your stories are interesting, but could you separate your story into paragraphs please because it is really difficult to read and intimidating to look at in some ways, keep it up! :)

Well, I think your story was awesome! Keep writing stories.