sorry last review was meant to be for another fic.i guess having so many open tabs in firefox all of them of fanfiction is not so good

i was going to read sounded... luckily for fics which pairing is not set i always read its reviews to know the pairing and not end up dissappointed.i did that just in time cuz i find shinji/rei pairing(its mere mention makes me shiver fron disgust) ridiculous just as naru/hina in naruto.i prefer ANY IT DOESNT MATTER WETHER ITS GOOD OR BAD shinki/asuka fic-i think its more im not reading any sinji rei fanfiction but good luck with your story

This is a great story I really liked it!

I only two main complants about it though.

A) The sudden relationship that favor TojixRei seemmed a little off but not becuase of the pairing, but just the knowledge of the well-known TojixHikari. To me, it was a little forced.

B) Near the later chapters everything just seemed to speed up and everything started to get confusing. Everything seemed rushed at the end.

okay, I'm not even going to bother attempting to read this. Take the time to separate your talking parts and such instead of having a few huge paragraphs. It makes reading things a hell of a lot easier.

great story!

awesome story keep up the work the story keep getting better and better as it went on it has a very good story line to it hope to see more stories like it soon seeya

Just browsing through past stories and came across this. WOW! Very enjoyable! Hope mine scrubs up half as good. T

I have to say I prefer the other ending to this one, it seems to fit with the rest of the story better. I must admit that this is not something I had thought of, the pilots being able to use these abilities due to them being pilots, well except for Rei being a half Angel and all. Yet another good story.

odd story but i like it

Nice story. I love this ending as well, it is very unique.

After reading the first 2 chapters, I felt the need to submit a review. I like reading fanfictions, mostly because a lot of the time, you can chart a persons writing ability over time. I have noticed quite an improvement in descriptive ability and plot developement. I hope that you keep up the good work. I will be interested in watching your writing ability further improve. For now, good job!

Chewie

is going to sound mean. So let's start with a compliment. I like your ideas and plots. I used to read your works before my friend had me distracted into Ranma crossover fics, and let me tell you, THERE ARE SOME HUGE ASS FICS. I've read some as long as novels, and I'm starting on one even longer. I used to be a hardcore eva fanfic fan, execpt I cannot seem to find any long ones. But reading those exceptional fics, then coming back to catch up on your work, Your work has to read. You have good ideas, it's just the way you format your story. You do not give a semblance of going gradually. Characters should grow, into the new ones you create from them. Not suddenly, BAAM, Shinji had a backbone. In Bonds of Love and Survival, you had this whole, "and THEN!" feeling to it. You use to many exclaimations. And to a person who hears them speaking in his head, the exclaimation denotes a type of "excited" or "firm" speech, that in your stories, are highly uncalled for. I think you should stop writing for a bit, and then read some awesome long, novels-que stories. It'll help your writing. If you are a Ranma fan, i recomend some jimbader, if you would like a Ranma/Eva/Bubblegum crossover, stop by a huge 5mb fic that is calle,d "just won't die." My personal fav is Nabiki 1/2. Has romance, amusing sexual scenes, action, the works. And very complicated. It is beyond me how he,jimbader, wrote Oh so many fics of novel length, but theyre good for the most part. Scratch that, exceptional. Well anyway, I would like it if you would let me format your stories somewhat. You can tell me if it's good or not. Maybe your just not a big person on format. But to be able to write, one must read. If you humor my request, I'll take what you already have online, and re-format it into a more readable format. Just email me, it's in my profile.

I really enjoyed this story an interesting end. On to the next one Ja-ne (_)

so far so good i can hardly wait to read the next chapters. Ja-ne (_)

I checked out your first chapter- couldn't stop reading until I finished your whole story. Simply amazing how you came up with all of this. A really great, emotional story. Very detailed. 10/10.