Oh man that was so sad! *sniffs* So so sad, especially at the end! Though I gotta say writing it this was is very neat. I so can't wait to see what happens!

At first I had missed about how you were going to write it this way and thought- well man I thought this was going to be a series...how is it gonna be one if ya kill the character right away?!

Then I saw the note better. Haha!

Anyways I can't wait to read more! You hafta update this!!