can i show more fury. i swear if it was me i would have punched them in the gut and THEN i would have left. plus, you need to explain to them why we're leaving. ya know the shikamaru and good connection shit. love ya muah! update ya biatch!

*gasp!* ben i am offended. i have NOT led you to the liberty of writing alone! last time i checked me and cwadia are writing our own versions too! by the way...mines is already up! YAY!

Aw, kawaii! X3 Update soon!

I like this rewrite!! Not as insane, but just enough to keep it from being a total mary-sue. The pairings aren't gonna change, are they? If not, I'm curious on how Gaara would meet up with them while he's in Suna. Anyways, Awesome job, keep up the good work, and update soon!!

Hi ben!

Yay! U finally posted the story! ^_^