Wow that was awesome, especially the end, you nailed it.

ROTFLMAO...:: snorts:: Quite amusing I must say.

"and then I put the sun in my pocket and threw it at them..." Lol! I've never seen this side of Cloud before... What an imaginative guy! =P You should write more more humor. You're a natural! Not that I'm saying that you should quit the other categories that you write... Anyhoo, keep up the great work! ^_^

Kitkatkitkat! Very good, I liked the way Cloud kept on interrupting and the sarcastic humor is funny! I've jus made the connection that joe=jey=Jagged Edge? Am I correct? *Chicky scratches her curly head and thinks of what shes going to have for dinner*

That was pretty silly...nice work.

This was a cute little story. It wasn't laugh-out-loud for me, but it was silly and inane - and that's humor, I guess. At times it was like watching Wild America with a 5 year old, with Final Fantasy thrown in as a backdrop.

this was good! you must have played this game just as often as me!

so what if it's stupid - I think it's good. Like the idea of crossover with teh MOG house..

Personally, I don't agree with that part of Moogles being cats, but, uh. whatever. :P

Anyway, that was one *weird* fic. Got me laughing though. Good job. :)

*grins* Cute!

::laughs hysterically:: That was great! I love Cloud, that dopey bastard. And I love moogles. Keep writing! ^.~

I suppose everyone expected me to submit a review eh? well, you were right ^^ how could i resist? I can't resist so thats why i'm here but not really to review the story. i just want to say that I Love You too kat :) hehe, and i'm going to kill Cloud ofr saying he hated you >: even if you did write the story ^^ hehe you do realize now that i'm going to have to write a fic of my own and dedicate it to you but thats what you want i know ;) you little trickster you ;) hehe, ok, nough of the mushy stuff.
great story (did you expect me to say anything less?) and thanks for the dedication but you just wait till i dedicate one to you ;) Luv Ya!!!!!
Joey

OMG! I love this! It's so funny! Mogs are so cute, Cloud's... so ummmm Cloud.... I think that explains everything!

LOL! I don't know whether I liked it because I think Cloud is stupid, or b/c I hate that @#%$ Mog game, or because this story is completely original, but whatever it was, it worked. Great job!

Very weird(especially the Cloud parts) but funny.