Loved it

try not to be so clinical with the sex.

Good lord... Now There’s An Idea... Cloud covered in syrup... I want some waffles now lol... and I will never look at syrup in the smae light ever again lmao XP

Awesome! More plz :D

poor cloud

getting beat up

How strange; I just read Crimson Shocker's version and was feeling uncomfortable at the similarities, until I caught your explanation of shared prompts. I love Cloud and Tifa, so thanks for this. I wonder why Cloud didn't holler out, tho. Who else would it be than Tifa? Maybe he was just that tired! I'll keep dropping by for more stories... mc

srry for the late reveiw.

I really like this chapter, it was 'aw cute moment'. But I was lil afaird to read it after I read ur a/n and had the name Aerith in it, but i kept reading it and I'm gald I did.

i love this chapter! XD soo sweet. :P

Nice Nice. I don't know if it's possible for you to write a Cloud that isn't adorable. lol

awe you should add on to this one it was awesome

haha the end was funny

I have to say that this is my fave so far. I love Cloud's character throughout the entire piece. The shy Cloud is the most adorable Cloud but also the hardest Cloud to write without making him a cocky ass. Kudos to you!

srry for the late review. *drop to her knees and beg for forgivness* YAY! LEMONHEADS! I was really cute.

wow mad u ended it like that

Aww how cute !