Love it.

Awesome

I really liked this :) Your dreams were horrifyingly ingenious. Very original. I always wondered how the boys dealt with being separated at school. I like that Edmund sleepwalks. That felt very original as well. Basically, you made the cliche nightmares theme interesting again, and for that I commend you.
Also, a little brotherly fluff is always appreciated!
Nice job!
Yours,
Rayven

beautiful story... very moving and very well written!

love the end.

Awesome, awesome job! I loved it. Thank you so much for sharing this!

-Desi Jo

AWWWWW.

I love the way you write the love between them! :3

I can't believe I haven't commented on this... I read it ages ago and am rereading it now. This is another great piece from you. The vividness of the nightmares and the resolution of story are spot on. It could have been just a series of one-shots about what could have gone wrong in "Prince Caspian", but you made it into an uplifting story that feels real. We've all had nightmares, so we can all relate- though like Ed, I tend to sleepwalk instead (I've woken up to find myself at the kitchen table a quite a few times). To me, the most impressive thing about this story is the way you slip in necessary OCs. We barely meet the classmates, the coach, and the nurse, but we still have a good, rounded idea of their characters. Well done :)

Okay, I love stories that somehow involve the kids' schoolmates somewhat, and this was a great one! And the nurse! Yeah, I bet that was a shock for her; no one expects PTSD in young teenagers, even if they are in a way. Thanks for sharing this!

Awww, great story! Glad that was settle! The dreams that Peter was having was horrific. The last chapter, made me so upset. I can see why Peter was upset! Glad it turned out alright though. D

Beautifully written! I love brotherfics, and this one was great! :)

Awesome story

Peter's nightmares would be terrible to experiecne. Well atlest he has someone to help him out. I wonder what Edmund dreams about. I mean they have to be pretty bad if he nearly chkoes and stabs a student while sleepwalking.

Speaking of wich why does he have knife (is it a habit or somethin')? Feel bad for the nurse, she doesn't know what hit her

I like how you portrayed the brothers in relation to their characters and to each other; very well done.

is it over?

The White Witch was . . . disturbing.

AW! That was so sweet!

I love Pete and Ed's relationship, and yes, in my opinion, this nightmare story is original! I know it's been done a million times, but I'm going to write one, too; not about the same people, of course, but... XD

I loved that all of his dreams were bad after returning from Narnia the first time, but now, all of his dreams are so much worse! It's so sad to see Peter in pain, but it's so beautiful when/how Ed comforts him! It's so sad to know Ed has nightmares, too, but at least his aren't nearly as bad... Yeah, he just sleepwalks and almost stabs/breaks the neck of the boy(s) trying to help him. XP

Rock on! This is a completely amazing story so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Yay, Ed moved in! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)