Good job. I admit that I was kind of iffy on the first couple of chapters, but I'm really interested in this now. I'm looking forward to reading more. Good luck!

A real big problem from this for me is the years involved. Were her teachers teaching the same thing in the same school for the last 10 years before she went there? Not to mention the material being quite different due to upgrading technology and whatnot... Oh well, it's not that big an issue.

cute! in a I'm-so-scared-I-wet-my-panty kinda way! woo!

Bawhahahaha! Wonderbar! 110%! humourous yet touching, you as an author, you have an exceptional gift of the gab. even tough the first scene was heart retching, I toughed it out and found the story a truely worth while read.

She just got herself her own army?? This story is great, I love it ^_^

This is freaking scary.

MORE!

amazing chapter!

Take one school of hell-hound **, add one pureblood cause bent on extermination, throw in a dash of crazy hellcat, and the result, CHAOS!

realistically now how is it they have the magical power to do al this magic knowlege is one thing and the magic they wer born with yes but hermione was never this powerful l even as an adult and while muggle are easy to take advantage of
how could any bay get one over on the malfoys like that how did they get past the wards thier not blood related and theyve already shown thier capable of dnagerous magic how did they get in to the library im sure it would have been well protected really if it was that easy they could sneak up on voldermort and incapacitate him for them selves
and with the level of parania the potter should be at how do they imagine thier going to steal bits of their felsh and bone much less their magic without their permission
and shes not willing to risk her magic but shell risk harrys parents im sure harry would love that
shes no better than dumbledore she deosnt care wht happens as long as the wepon lives long enough to destroy voldermort and he doesnt decide not to do it

Nice to see that Hermiones aren't quite hypocritical enough to declare that because in the future they didn't change Draco was raised to be a bastard he is totally irredeemable in this timeline, but those poor girls at Trinian's are just misunderstood or some such crap...

Stuff like "Slytherins are evil and Gryffs are good" annoys me, but it does fit canon that in magic world some such things may be foreordained. Also, it explains why nobody doesn't just obliviate criminals and rearrange their memories&personalities, which I think would equal a death sentence.

This is a friggin awesome story. And this last chapter? The best so far. I cannot wait to see what you do next. And how exactly will you be killing off Voldie - inventively I hope!

Hee hee. Instead of creating super criminals try to think of it as giving these girls a chance at life they didn't have before.

What a strange place.

Hee hee Pity Jane didn't think about that.

Grats on the tumors going down!! That is worht celebrating. As for James, what is wrong with not getting off a shot. Hermione needs to give them the concept of long range killing.