This is a marvelous story, you describe every feeling like I imagined it. It is incredible how much detail you put into it, I feel like I'm watching this on t.v.

gosh its so cute i love this story you better keep udating it! ... or else. ... >:0

OH PLEASE OH PLEASE WRITE MORE!

wow!! plz update soon. that was amasing!

omg i luv this story please update son

Aww, I like it! I've always loved Peter. My favorite is the new, real actor movie. I think they found the perfect "peter" to play the part. I am looking forward to more of your story.:0)

i love this story! it is awesome. i cant wait till Jeni is healed because she will then get to go on one of Peter's many adventures! hey do you think that Jeni will be sble to help get rid of Richard. Also watch out for typos ive caught a few. pleaz update soon.

peace & happyness
Barbie

I love this story, it's so incredibly well done! I think you're doing a great job staying true to Peter's character instead of just turning him into some fantasy of your own. My only suggestion is that you make Peter's speech a little less formal. While he may feel complex emotions, he wouldn't really convey them so formally - he's forever a child and so should speak simply. Other than that I think this story is wonderful and I can't wait for the next one! :)

I loved this chapter! This is probably my favorite one yet. Very well done.

I loved this first chapter and am so excited to read more! Too often authors on this site rush right into the climax of their story, but you took your time and set the scene. I'm really enjoying this story.

UPDATE! I love it.

This is really good! I love how you've portrayed the characters. Keep going!

interesting

Oh I loved it!! It just gets better!! Great job. Update soon please!

Once again, great job. I loved it. Update soon please!