great version of Calvin and Hobbes I like the canoe idea it really fits Calvin and Hobbes but maybe work on mum as I'm not 100% sure that she would "growl like a mad dog" but good all the same

Boy, what a pathetic play! I wouldn't even pay half a penny to see that thing!

But I impressed at how you managed to portray Watterson's original comic strips in prose and still made sure that it retained it's unbelievable humor!

Two thumbs up!

P.S And I seriously don't understand where you get your ideas about Andy's notorious sarcastic speeches. They just sound so witty yet so logical.

Interestingly enough, Calvin didn't destroy the set DURING the play.

Yeah, that's what I call average.

Great! One of your best chapters yet! Those void feeders look like some evolved form of dementors, what what with no eyes and one big hole in their face. I wonder who that dark figure was.

The rhymes were hilarious and completely loony and nonsensical! But did you know that silver also rhymes with a few words like deliver.

What's gonna happen to Holographic Retro?

So it was Retro! Very surprising. I wonder what'll happen to Hologram Retro now that his real counterpart wants to deactivate him?

I wonder who is that guy the three groups are looking for.

It's the end of the Annkorian world...

Calvin got his memory back so early? Then what was the point of of even putting that in there? I know it'll have some effect later on in the story, right? It has to.

And boy it looks like there's going to be a bit of bloodshed in the next chapter.

Oh boy this is getting suspenseful. You're becoming a real natural at incorporating action with humor. But who is that guy in the cell?

Doesn't sound like Retro, definitely not Brainstorm! Could it be Thunderstorm?

HM, I just can't tell who that is. I think it is Rupert Chill.
Oh and I forgot to ask you that I could use Nivlac and Sebboh, besides it's a story when they go to the opisit world, you agrea with me

OMG!
I THINK IT'S RETRO!

Man, this is getting really exciting and suspenseful! I mean it. But I thought Sherman got rid of the chip in Retro Chill