 Spirit414 2009-06-17 . chapter 1AW. That was cute :)
I do think that your Jack became a bit more canon as the story progressed, though you had more free reign with him in the beginning because we never really saw what Jack was like outside of being with Ennis.
As for Ennis, he's a hard character to get right, I thought you did a pretty good job of it. He was adorable. :)
Nice idea and story.
~Spirit |