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The Brat Princess
2009-10-16 . chapter 5
Hey hun! Sorry it's taken me a while to review. School and all that...Loved this whole chappie!

Favourite parts were-

^“When there’s a woman you’d give up all that you are for, who you think about ninety-nine point nine, nine, ad infinitum percent of the time, and she’s suddenly torn viciously from your arms, you tend to get a bit…broody.”^

I could totally picture Wes going off on a tangent like that. So cute!

When you mentioned him saving some of her stuff I was hoping you'd reference a certain bunny and low and behold-Feigenbaum! Yay! It always made me cry when she forgot who he was before she died. *sniff*

Double yay! Naughty Wesley and Fred!

Also loved the poker and Illyria's reaction. And Spike and his theories about sex with robots...lol

Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!
RabidReject
2009-10-12 . chapter 5
Awesome.
SpeedDemon315
2009-10-12 . chapter 5
YES! Wes and Fred love--they're getting it down tonight! Good thing everyone else was playing poker so there would be less of a chance being interrupted. I'm sure Wesley and Fred wouldn't be pleased--at all.

Haha, speaking of the poker game, that was bloody hilarious! Spike never ceases to amuse me. And the rest are sure lucky they're not playing strip poker...(ah, that brings ideas for our Angel/Charmed+ Heat Xover. XD)

Of course, this was another wonderful, well-written chapter you have conjured out from that brilliant mind of yours! I look forward to what betides next to the Angel cast. ^^
Leah Day
2009-10-12 . chapter 5
Gorgeous! Really, really gorgeous! I've been looking forward to this for such a long time.

The only thing that put me off slightly was this bit here.

"Let’s change the subject, shall we? Where’s your room at, Wesley?”

I'd change it to either "Where is your room, Wesley" or "Where's your room"

other then that. More please :) Leah.
Bonifacio
2009-09-12 . chapter 4
AH more more more. i'm intrigued by your plotline. :-)
IdiotSavant8009
2009-08-25 . chapter 4
Can't wait for more!
IdiotSavant8009
2009-08-25 . chapter 2
It's, like, the crappiest review ever, but I'm too tired for anything more than

:D
The Brat Princess
2009-07-31 . chapter 4
Yay update!
Loved this chapter. I'm so eager to find out what Morrigan's plan is...the suspense is killing me! Mild exaggeration.
Yes, evil Lindsey may be but I think I speak for every female Angel fan when I say "DAMN!" Loved how his first words on being resurected was a continuation of his dying ones. Classic Lindsey!
Gotta say, I'll miss having him and Lilah stabbing each other in the back but Eve is just as good!
Good job!
Brat Princess.=)
SpeedDemon315
2009-07-31 . chapter 4
Ah, I knew you would bring back Lindsey to life. And as I was reading, I thought, "Well, if she's bringing back Lindsey then Eve might be the other person she's going to revive." Looks like Lindsey won't be lonely now... ;D

Intriguing chapter, I enjoyed this very much. Heh, Morrigan has more nicknames than Thanatos here, if you don't count 'Than' and 'Thannie'. XD But I am curious in what task she wants them to perform--won't be something good, I reckon.
RabidReject
2009-07-05 . chapter 3
Awesome. More soon!
SpeedDemon315
2009-07-04 . chapter 3
Yay, another chapter! Sorry I couldn't review earier, I started reading this yesterday but my friend came on so I had to stop. But I'm reviewing now!

Again, another wonderful chapter, I like how Wes and Fred are going to spend some qaulity time together. And Spike, of course, was hilarious as always ("I'm not your bloody pet!"). :D

And nice necromancer, she sounds awesome! And Cordelia...are we talking about the same Cordy here?

Keep up the excellent work and Godspeed, my friend!
The Brat Princess
2009-07-04 . chapter 3
Hi, another great chapter! I'm really curious about your OC and her role in bringing Fred back. And Cordy and Doyle are (kind of) back! It's like you're bringing back the people I love most. *A tear rolls down my cheek nostalgically.*
Fred's return was done really well. It would have been weird if Wesley accepted her right away with no hesitation. When they finally hugged I was so happy! Must have been weird for Fred to shake hands with her own body...awkward.
“Well, um…kind of but not really, see she moved out of his sister’s house and needed a place to stay, and we have so much space here so I invited her to stay with me-I mean, obviously not in my room, she has her own room, but she’s staying here,”
That really made me laugh. Angel is at his funniest when he can't form coherent sentences!I could really picture him squirming!
I presume Gunn is awkward because he feels uber-guilty about her death?
Just one tiny nit-pick-When you were describing Cordy you repeated part of the same description;she wore a short white dress, and she wore a short white dress.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Brat Princess.=)
The Brat Princess
2009-06-28 . chapter 2
So sorry, I hadn't realised you had updated! A quick remedy-I'll put this on Story Alert.
I really loved this. You captured Wes' emoness well. I was reminded of the last episodes where he is seriously depressed. You portrayed Illyria brilliantly-cold and matter-of-fact. And that ending...part of me melted inside. A Wes/Fred reunion, the thing I've always dreamed of!
Can't wait for chapter 3! Keep up the good work!
Brat=)
RabidReject
2009-06-24 . chapter 2
Nice. More please!
SpeedDemon315
2009-06-24 . chapter 2
Yay! Fred's here and Wesley can stop drinking! *throws confetti* Or maybe he'll drink again to celebrate, once he gets over the shock.

Oh, I totally forgot to ask you (this is completely irrevelent but bear with me my friend), what happened to Conor--did he die earlier on? I really need to get season 4 and 5... XP

Anyway, great chapter, I look forward to more! :D
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