Aww, that was so sweet. I love Remus/Sirius they are one of my favourite slash pairings.

good job, although all the italisised he's and him's got a little overdone after awile. Still, great writing! =D

Very good! I love RLSB! They are so cute! good story.

Your story is super cute, I really liked reading it, but... The last two lines are a bit awkward, and putting all of the him's and he's in italics was kind of overwhelming. I mean I know you want people to notice it but, after a while I kind of felt like I was being yelled at. YOur story was great though and I liked the idea of colors.

This was really sweet and well written, well done :] xo

Great story. :D

YAY!

Everything was great until Remus spoke. Wtf happened with that? If you edit, I'd start there. Good job on the colors, though! Nicely chosen.