 Siriusmunchkin 2009-12-10 . chapter 1Nice story. Sad, but nice. Malfoy is an evil slimey bastard that deserved whatever he got. |
 Moonprincess92 2009-10-23 . chapter 1This story was simply amazing. = D |
 Sarah 2009-08-25 . chapter 1 This story was so beautiful, I am such a sucker for love stories. I cried at the end. I like how you're continuing this plot line in 'Questions and Answers', I can't wait to find out what happend to Lavinia! Thanks for your awesome stories!! |
 dragongirlG 2009-08-05 . chapter 1I just had to read this after reading your 'Q&A' update - wow. This is so chilling! Lucius is supremely evil here, cold, calculating, and ruthless, and I feel terrible for Lavinia and especially for Narcissa (whose character's always fascinated me - you write her very well). Fabian, Gideon, Molly, and Remus and Sirius are perfectly characterized as well. Beautiful piece. |
 lmossm 2009-07-29 . chapter 1Wow. Voldemort distroyed so much. I have really gotten into your story of the Malfoys. I hope Draco digs his way out of this hole his family has created |
 MBP 2009-07-05 . chapter 1Oh, so you wanted me to read this one first to make me cry, huh? I knew you were mean. But ... wow. I love these brothers, and I love the way you got Ron in here, too. Even as a baby he loved to eat, huh? No surprise there. This is such a heartbreaking story, though... I hated watching them die. And I hated Lucius more than I ever have, and that's saying a LOT.
I guess I can move onto the others now... in the order so specified by you... |
 RaindropsOnTheRooftop 2009-07-02 . chapter 1aww how sad! and brilliant! loved it! i've never read anything with gideon and fabian before! it was very interesting! |
 wlrjb 2009-06-30 . chapter 1wow how sad. Hope you plan on continuing this story. |
 CrowningGlory 2009-06-26 . chapter 1Hi,
Lovely Story...
But i must say interesting choice of characters...i havent read many stories about Prewett brotheres which explore such angle...
Do update soon...
awaiting for the next chapter |
 Jasminny 2009-06-25 . chapter 1aw. that's so sad. i always wondered how fabion and gideon died. but this is another story like the andy/ted story of forbidden love. it's so sad. especially how she had to see him die. but extremely well written!:D |
 ClayCelloFire 2009-06-21 . chapter 1I'd never read a fic about Fabian and Gideon before. This was really good. |
 FinnFiona 2009-06-21 . chapter 1Wow... insert expletive here...! That was really captivating, especially the latter half. I feel terrible for everyone... But I love the way you've imagined this event, even though its terribly depressing. And there's something very fitting about the very unceremonious way that Fabian and Gideon met their end. But goodness is it ever sad... Especially for Gideon, I think.
But I'm even more intrigued now to see how this fits into your other story. But man, this just punches you in the gut. Sorry it took me so long to get to it--lovely job! |
 lemonwedges4 2009-06-19 . chapter 1Love it! An awesome addition!! |
 Rori Potter 2009-06-19 . chapter 1That was wow. Poor Lavinia. |
 carolyn jinn 2009-06-19 . chapter 1WELL THAT WAS GREAT.
Such a tragic love story.
I hesitated reading this story BUT in the end , I couldn't resist reading another one of your wonderful stories. You have a great way with words.
Keep writing and updating your other great stories.
Carolyn. |