;_; That was just warm, fuzzy and wonderful. This is one of the better characterizations of Malon I've seen on I like how the story almost makes the reader feel warm from the inside out. The headbumping wasincredibly cheesey, but really, I think that's what was charming about that part.

What an absolutely beautiful story...I love all the description you put into it. Very nice!

Wow, this is amazing! I love it, it's so sweet! You can actually feel the silence, the embarrassment...It's like you're actually going through the same thing. It's like every romantic's dream, to finally find someone who'll just hold you and talk to you without being too stupid. Another FAVE!

good story but are you british or something 'cause you keep on calling christmas, 'noel' and that is just kinda weird

not much to say but seet!_!aw!

Ahh thats so sweet!

Lovely story. Beautiful description... I love these kind of stories: it's simple, descriptive, well-written, touching and the romance isn't in your face like most of the Malon/Link fics (and it doesn't involve the evil Zelda) on - wrote one myself but took it off the site as it needed some serious rewriting...

*Anyway* I like your writing style. It's simple, a bit poetic... description mostly. (I'm quite description fanatical by the way.) I can't say much for some of the language, but otherwise...

Oh, and Malon's character - I really liked it. Here she's thankfully *not* portrayed as some mindlessly happy creature - she's got depth, which I thoroughly enjoyed. Most of the portrayals of Malon I've come across show her as incessantly jovial and shallow. This is (*sigh*, dare I say it?) my kind of Malon.

Well then... once again, I loved it! Hope I come across other like it!

- Selah!

Oh my Ra! That was SO adorable. The descriptions were incredible, and you really have a talent for drawing the reader into the story. The story was...I don't know how to say it. Gorgeous. Don't ask how a story can be gorgeous, it's just the best word for this one. Excellent work.

And on a less serious note:

WOOHOO! GO MALINKERS! WOO! MALON X LINK FOREVER!

-RW

Wow. I love this. I really like how you neglect to mention their names until the very end; there's something very...cool about that. Your style is very clear, very smooth, and very elegant. - And I love the dialouge because there's something very realistic about it, and that's what's so appealling. - Bottom line: Sweet story. Aw!

Awwwwwww how sweet. I thought it was so cute. I love reading your stories.

Aww. Wonderful. You are very talented - the atmosphere, the characterization, the relationship, and the storytelling. All lovely. Keep it up, kitten! Highschool is horrid, isn't it? I'm an effing junior. And I hate chemistry. Baah baah!