Huh, what's really weird about this is that I'm called Bekkah and my friend is called Katie xD

It's good so far, you've got a good mystery going, though don't let it drag on for too long, I've made that mistake before xD

- Bekkah

I haven't read this, and I am sure it is good, but it a 'Shades Children' fic and that is where you should post it, NOT on the Old Kingdom Trilogy fandom.