It's really stupid that my story, which in all honesty isn't that good, should get more reviews in 6 chapters than this story, which is frankly awesome, has in 21 chapters.

Come on, you can't stop!! This is honestly one of the best stories I've read on this site! I do agree that it's a hastle to update regularly because of real life and all that, but don't stop!

Also, it would be really impolite to stop in the middle of a cliffhanger... At the very least, try to finish season three? :(

It's all up to you, but know there will be at least one very disappointed person if you stop...

B-b-but it's a really good story! D:
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Don't go... ><

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At least write oneshots when you feel like it... PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING! YOU'RE AN AWESOME WRITER! D:

Sorry for the late review, but it's precisely the same reason as you (school=argh...)

you hate Krystal? D:

Actually, it's ok :p at least you're not another Slippy hater! Or... Are you? 0_o

Anyways, good luck with finishing your chapter! I'm waiting for it :D

Just wanted to know I started reading your story at about 1:30 this afternoon and finished chapter twenty at about 5:24 this afternoon.

All in all, this is a good read. Some more detail would be helpful in the story and it would help paint pictures better, but overall I like it.

Keep it up! :P

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I don't think I'll ever become used to the dialogue in your story. It's just so... So... I dunno, perfect! For example, I loved the exchange between Slippy and his dad. But the plot is also up to game, since you've added another twist here! Apparently, it seems that Krystal's mind control has left weird side effects, and I'm wondering if it will turn out good or not. And how dare you finish the chapter here! Now I have to wait for the next one to know what happens to Peppy and Katt! I really hope next chapter is soon!

You are awesome. Don't stop writing!

I really liked this chapter for some reason :) I especially adore how you keep every character in character, and they all seem... Natural in some way. In other fics, you sometimes don't feel you're getting the real Fox or the real Katt, but in this fic you've also added a few extras (like the black lab) which are pretty cool in my opinion.

I hope Falco will recover from the coma! And it's really cute to see Katt still worry after Falco in her own way, even though sometimes he's honestly an insufferable jerk. I've gotta say, you completely twisted the whole plot when Krystal went bad, and Star Wolf captured the general. Nice use of her telepathic abilities too!

Can't wait for more, so I hope next time I find wifi the next chapter will be up! Oh, and don't forget... Take your time too! :p

This chapter... Was just awesome... If I could have read it any faster, I would have, because the whole fights were incredible!

First, just the whole dialogue and replies between the members of the team felt realistic, and not out of place like a few other fics I read.

Then you juggled perfectly between the two fights happening, with Slippy vs Leon and Fox vs Falco.

My only 'regrets' (meaning don't take them seriously) are that you could have added a few descriptions to the battle with Fox and Falco (like kicks, feints and stuff) but honestly, you don't need it either. The other 'regret' is that Slippy just crashed, and he hops out of the Arwing? Of course, you can also pass that off as a safety harness in the fighter plane, or an anti-crash system, or something.

But seriously, congrats for this chapter. I loved it!

How could you! Falco escaped, but then gets intercepted by a mind-controlling Krystal? That's a double crusher, since that means that Krystal is now almost perfect in mind control. I'm still amazed how you still manage to keep Falco true to his character, especially with the "Falco decided to be careless."

Another amazing thing is that this chapter could be considered 'short', but it still packs a punch. I really hope you don't lose your will to write, and I'm sure other people are going to review this sooner or later! I'm having some trouble finding internet now, so I'm not sure when I'll be able to check my mails and possibly read the next chapter. But I'll be sure to read it, no matter what! Don't stop writing!

Really sorry for the late review, but better late than never, right...?

I was utterly surprised by the fact that Krystal was a traitor. Falco gave some really good points there, so why would she betray Fox anyway...? Anyway, huge plot twist there, what with the mind control and Star Wolf capturing the General. Can't wait for more!

And keep on writing!

Damn, Ralph and Alex stooped real low.

I'd suggest more insight on Falco's character. You could also use a bit more description for some the action scenes and such. The latter, however, is compromised by the dialogue, which I actually find really well-written.

But aside from that, it's a great story!

Keep up the good work! ^^

Yeah it's a post-Adventures fic! Why do you always write something that I never saw anywhere else before? Like an actually realistic story of Falco. I really love these "seasons" of yours, and I honestly hope you won't stop after this one.

And just like that, the Star Fox team is born! Well, at least it looks like it more or less. I'm surprised that Fox isn't a great natural flyer when he joins the academy, but it's actually an interesting perspective. And I am so glad that finally, there is a fic where Slippy is not an annoying geek who is completely useless! It's funny that in loads of other fics, for the "intelligent" guy of the team, he's stupid, but here he is clearly not and I thank you for it.

They're dead? That's so sad... But the question is, what happens after? I mean, Leon's there holding a gun... Then what? He lets them all go for no reason? Falco could be mad with grief over the deaths he saw! Well, apart from that little time surge there, I liked the way the chapter was written, though I obviously didn't like its sad content... But a fic is a fic, and this great one is yours!

I just read the first three chapters (prologu counts as one) and I already love this fic. This is my first time reading something from Falco's POV, and it's going good for now! Luckily, there are still more chapters for me to read now. Great work!