|Reviews for Duty First|
| fangirl29yahoo.com 7/27/10 . chapter 1
OK, you should just call these "introductions" and then continue with a follow up of, i don't know, like a million chapters because I would love to read more about my favorite major ;)
| karonkgb 7/22/10 . chapter 1
They work together well.
| sb4ever 6/20/09 . chapter 1
Nice! I enjoy stories featuring the secondary characters and I love Lorne and Zelenka.
| welsh-nikki 6/19/09 . chapter 1
I think I was supposed to read this one before the other one?
| Penelope the Perky Penguin 6/18/09 . chapter 1
Really good story. Keep writing, you're good.
| John's PuddleJumper 6/16/09 . chapter 1
Wow, a nice short but sharp story. Could be nice to see the before and after surrounding the story, how it got be like that and the affects for Atlantis after war broke out.
| LadyNiko 6/15/09 . chapter 1
This was simply awesome in how compact it was, but so driven. I loved how you kept it straight and simple in Lorne's POV & how he was more worried about Dr. Z than himself.
I would totally love to see a follow up piece on this written from Radek's POV.
| TheNaggingCube 6/15/09 . chapter 1
nice and believable. i liked it.
| Susan the Tartan Turtle 6/15/09 . chapter 1
Short and cute story with Lorne whump - enjoyable reading. Thanks.
| Denouement Intrusion 6/15/09 . chapter 1
I missed Radek too. In many ways I liked him better anyway. Just as he does here, he always seemed to sense what was needed and get on with it. You have captured perfectly the understated but staunch courage and sense of duty that both of them displayed throughout the series.
Again a nice satisfying job. This one has the potential to be a lot more...any chance you might consider expanding it?
Am I the first reviewer? if so, YAY for me and I'm sure there will be many more for these neat snippets of 'Lantean life. Have a great week! Thanks for sharing these.