Aw, the ending is so nice, that's the sort of thing that makes me smile, forgetting the sadness for just a while.

Aw, so sad...made me cry...

very nicely written

I may have missed something but who is Misty? Also, I think "Maiya" was spelled as "Maya" (at least in the english release of the game.

A complete 360 from your other poem (Waking Up to You), this one is full of the heavy feeling impending loss. I perceive the way you write Mint as an stronger, more mature woman. It's an interesting change from her more comical persona in the game.

Your poems are a treat to read. Please do keep writing. _