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PrincessPika
2010-01-02 . chapter 1
Aww, how cute!!

-Pika-chan
Katie - Lyn Della Robia
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
Barrow her character?
lily.flower
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Aw, that was too amazingly adorable. :D I love writing notes, and I agree, it is much less nerve-wracking than actual conversations. x3 Too cute, too cute. <3 Loved it. :)
caveat lector
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
A little too short for me, perhaps. However, I'm not complaining, seeing as this is extremely sweet and very tense. And on top of that you managed to capture universal truth: "don’t things seem more romantic on paper?". You know, that's one of those things people wish THEY had come up with for THEIR fanfictions, heh.
Love the characterizations, the general writing, and I particularly adore the way you've written their notes. Very realistic and believable.
Thumbs up!
Yoru K-Chan
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Aw... this was so cute...XD
Love your writing its amazing... I cant draw myself away.
The 3rd Valkyrie
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
ah! cute! i would be way too ebarassed to write 'i love you' on paper though, and i'm a Math class note passer as well. ^^ mello's so adorable.
Spulah
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
Wow, this was so sweet. And beautiful. And kind of the way you'd expect them to act.
I love it XD
HeartBeatFailure-x
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
So sweet ^_^
devils address
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
awesome they kissed finally
devils address
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
awesome they kissed finally
cheese on Toast
2009-06-26 . chapter 1
That was absolutely amazingly sweet and just epic. Amazingly intense and gripping! Just amazing and awesome. Lovely writing :D
Skyskater
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
That was adorable.

I can't...express how adorable it was, but...multiply adorable by infinity and you MIGHT get there.

Keep writing!
Me
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Dude. That was intense.
I . . . LOVED IT!
That was such a nice story it was so amazing! I love the part when Matt just kept saying 'I love you.'
That's my favorite part.


That was awesome! Keep on writing!
By the way, you have excellent vocabulary skills!
-Me
Laimielle
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this very much. So, so, so adorable. I giggled when Matt wrote to Mello about his 'enticing sapphire eyes'. Mello getting all flustered was really cute, too. I loved it. :3 Thanks for sharing!
kenjiilicious
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
wow it reminds me of the notes i pass to friends. its a great story and i love Matt and Mello!
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