The format felt a bit weird, but's just me. I think the language could have been toned down more as well. But it was still a funny chapter. Love the kink meme reference. I should look it up at sometime.

DerekAWM took the words right out of my mouth. And there needs to be more reviewers in my opinion. Oh yeah, can I have a suggestion? I think it would be really cool if you add Ema x Apollo. Cause I think it would give tension in Apollo and Trucy's affair and also teach Klavier a lesson.

Just as I hoped for. Wocky got let off. Godot seemed to be a bit of a waste of space and I noticed some commas in weird places. But you can ignore me since I'm not good at writing but I love reading. But Salsa was hilarious, I think he's one of the most funniest OC's I know.

Meh I can see Klavier losing his virginity to Kristoph and nice to tie that in regarding with Apollo & Trucy. Something will happen soon with Apollo & Trucy's relationship that will be kept secret from Phoenix and Iris until something bad happens because of that. Salsa banging Apollo and Klavier's heads together was rather fun.

My Response:
a jamaican judge? that is pure genius and i thought that you would make desiree a total golddigger but then you showed some sympathy. If you intend to continue this it would be cool if Godot died in Apollo's arms coz Godot's life is like drenched in tragic irony but at least this way he will be with the one he loves...
i'm a devoted and hardcore fan of apolloxema so it really ticked me off with the stunt Gavin pulled off but hey, your story right...

I must agree with Apollo, WHAT THE -bleep- WAS THAT!

I liked all the Godot Lines and the reference to his Reminsince Song "Bitter Taste Of Truth". The trial was an interesting experience. The Wocky/Pearl bits were nice and a great addition.

And I loved this fic.

WOW! CONFLICT! Larry injuring Wocky, that reminds me of the prolouge to turnabout memories. Man I read all of these nine chapters plus the prolougue and enjoyed it all can't wait to see what's next. I hope Wocky ge's found not guilty. And I wonder how Lana's gonna show up since you mentioned her on your poll. I shall wait pateintly for an update!

The characters are perfect, sometimes they can be a bit off but they're great none the less.

MIEGO FTW. Godot being Apollo's Dad FTW. I think this chapter was perfect!

OH WOW! Godot = Apollo's father. That has always been a kink of mine. I LOVE YOU FOR THIS! I agree with Platinum Skye about the intervew being a nice read too. =D And wow, Maya was almost raped and Franziska saved her. It now makes more sense why you have Maya working for Franziska. I think she did knda take over the interview a bit. But I love this chapter still.

Nice to see some more Pearl x Wocky. I liked that pair thanks to Lilabird and Nekonohime's fics. And ooh Matt x Luke is pairing I never thought about before. Tried feenie is funny and Trucy's reaction to Franziska being all famous was funny. And wow Lotta Hart has her own TV show. Well seven years can make a difference. XD

WTF at the first scene. Kristoph x Dahlia sure is a fucked up pairing but it will lead to much more choas I can feel it in my bones. And I thought it was odd how the trial ended, but you filled that plotwhole out well. Awesome how Trucy oticed it, I hope Apollo cheers up soon. And that was a quite a shocking ending where iris admits to Apollo and Trucy that she's Phoenix's fiance. Now I'm wondering what happened to Iris between her first scene in this fic and the last scene in this chapter. I can imagine Iris being a good cook too.

What a crazy trial this is turning out to be. And THAT KLEMA SCENE WAS WAY RANDOM! But I loved it cause it was so cute and I can imagine Klavier doing that. Reminds me of that scene in 10 things I hate about you where the guys sings the exact same song to her.

I casn imagine Gumshoe calling his son Copper too.
Anyway nice stuff.

I wondered how long it would take before Iris made an appearance. The first paragraph showed a lot of things. I've always liked Iris and I have no idea why so many people hate her. I also like the way you write Larry, he reminds me of Feenie. XD

man I hate April. I hope that was the last we see of her.

Aww the Larry x Alita scenes were cute. Too bad it's not going to end up that way for Larry. ;.; It's a tragedy waiting to happen.

Sorry I don't have a account. I only just lurk around the place.

Now who could be sending those gifts for Franny? Miles? Hobo? paye? Adrian? Maybe even maya? I have no idea.

Anyway Wocky x Dessie is something I woud never have thought about. I don't think they would have worked out anyway and I was right. haha. I do feel sorry for Wocky cause in the games I think he was a cutie. Am I the only one who thinks like that?

Oh God MAYA LMAO A SAUSAGE. I think you ought to be careful but still it's funny.