 undead3 2009-10-05 . chapter 1oh...i like...however, kallen and nunnally arn't the only people in code geass...
and kallen was not at the massacure of the order but great work on placing a 'survivor' in...i really like...let's see where this leads
violence?
re-union of loved ones?
lelouch's secrets comming out?
more violnce?
conspericy? |
 Trayus 2009-09-26 . chapter 1A very intriguing start. Usually 'Kallen gets a Geass' stories are full of trite plot devices and are utterly boring to read, but this is an exception. I always liked believing Lelouch was alive (after all, with the whole memory transfer to Nunally, it's possible he has a Code, is it not?) and seeing a L/K reunion would be awesome.
Speaking of Kallen, you have two pairings listed in the summary. Does this mean Lelouch will start with Kallen, and end up with C.C.?
I'm usually a hard-liner when it comes to pairings (Lelouch/Kallen is my favorite), but this is so well-written I'm sure I'd continue reading it even if it didn't work out that way. Here's hoping you update soon! |
 Shinobigama 2009-06-19 . chapter 1 This has real potential to go far! I like the concept of VV and CC not being the only ones who can give Geass. Excellent plot, good writing style, I really like it! Keep up the good work! |
 IceFantom 2009-06-17 . chapter 1update soon, plz!! (luv it! XD) |
 Ghost140 2009-06-16 . chapter 1Seems like a nice idea for post-series go with it. |
 All That Is Left Unsaid 2009-06-16 . chapter 1A very interesting story and extremely well written. The attention paid to Kallen's Geass, such as how it focuses on secrets rather than all manner of thoughts is an interesting and creative clarification, along with detail of the secrets many people have. I must say, the landlady hating Kallen and her mother for surviving their ordeals is depressing, but very humanizing.
It seems sad that Nunally is adapting to being a politician, even to her own friends.
I'm also curious as to what you mean by starting with KallenxLelouch, but changing to CCxLelouch. Do you mean this in the sense of the focus of character interaction, or in a romantic sense?
In any case I will be keeping my eyes on this one. |
 thepinkmartini 2009-06-15 . chapter 1Cool start. I like where this is going and I love how you really got inside Kallen's head. I'm one of those Geass fans who believe that Lelouch is dead but I wouldn't mind reading this since it's really well written. But why would the pairing change to LelouchxCC later on though? I prefer Kalulu. haha just saying... |
 halomasterchief 2009-06-15 . chapter 1Awesome first chapter, it introduced your story well. A Geass that reveals people's most personal secrets, huh? I can see that being very useful to Kallen in the future, but I also like how you explored how it could be used in both positive and negative ways as well.
I'm not trying to be picky or anything, but if I remember correctly Kallen was still being held captive by Britannia when the Black Knights raided the Geass Cult, so I don't see how she could remember it if she wasn't there, haha (but that's an easy fix, I'm sure she found out about it through either one of the other Black Knights or Lelouch himself). Anyways, can't wait to see where you take this, you've got me interested now! |
 animeloverichi 2009-06-15 . chapter 1 Things got interesting really quick. I'll keep reading if you keep updating. |
 Worker72 2009-06-15 . chapter 1Now what is Lulu's plan for Kallen? Good chapter. |
 Darth Lelouch 2009-06-15 . chapter 1Very good, I hope that Kallen doosn't lost the control of geass. |
 nick2951 2009-06-15 . chapter 1Wow, very good start
I believe Kallen of all people would be the most angry about Lelouch's death; especially since his sacrifice could have been avoided. Her Geass is interesting and can lead to a lot of problems; some secrets need to stay secret. I look forward to what you do with this.
Update soon! |