 MysteryLady-Tx 2009-09-07 . chapter 1YIKES that was bad, especially cause Harry is just a child, and the reason he was acting like that was cause of Tom...
THANKS:"D Interesting story! |
 Araea Swiftwind 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Wow...this was...intense. |
 Chloe-LuvDaBug 2009-07-12 . chapter 1I love Snape and Harry together, but this was definately not like the normal endearing stories I read. I'm a major Snape fangirl so I naturally hate James and couldn't really bring myself to be angry with Sev in this fic though he had oral sex with a sleeping child...beautifully written though, amazing job! |
 abraxis 2009-07-06 . chapter 1I can't help but see Severus as the victim in this whole thing. Victimised by James in the first place and then again when LV pushes his buttons in revenge for his haveing turned traitor to the dark lord. Harry I see as LV's victim rather than Severus.
I would really like to see you continue this when time allows. |
 Kitten Koneko 2009-06-30 . chapter 1Oh definitely! Snape all the the way, man.
Huh, I thought the law said any sexual act that was non-con whether penetrational by use of a ** or a tool, or non-penetrational but still done against a person's consent was considered rape. Well, that sucks. The law so needs to be changed!
Wow, this was kinda a disturbing story. I think it was really cool, as it's different from the usual stories you find everywhere, and because the topic is rather taboo and unspoken of, and it's interesting to read about how Snape reacts to everything and what's going on in his mind. The last part with Voldemort was confusing to me at least, but I felt that it still worked because Harry is supposed to have a piece of Voldemort in him, and it also explains how he could half-way figure out what happened to him even though he'd be too young to understand it normally.
Koneko |
 sparkles 2009-06-17 . chapter 1 i would totally do Snape instead of James! Ftw |
 Ms. Marauder-Cullen 2009-06-16 . chapter 1I've never actually read something like this and that's a first. I did like this story, discluding what Severus did to Harry and what James did to Severus. I can understand why Sev did this to Harry though through his memory of the incident with James so I know why it happened, since it had to happen for the plot. Does that make any scense? I feel as if I'm rambling here.
OK. Moving on now.
I really did like how you ended it with Tom Riddle or Voldemort appearing in Harry's actions. I did like it too when Harry was talking about Lily and we could see some of Tom Riddle as well.
All in all, I give it a 9.5 and 5*'s. Definatly favoriting this one. |
 Barranca 2009-06-16 . chapter 1Chilling and so wrong, and so clever of you to show us the innocent child in the same body with the Dark Lord. They say that oftentimes the anticipation is more filling than the achievement - and Tom knows how to plan brilliantly, so no doubt the execution will leave nothing to be desired either. How vicious is the cycle. |
 hadaniko 2009-06-16 . chapter 1Ugly :( |
 black-hurt17 2009-06-16 . chapter 1m maybe sequel? hptmr/hplv the horcrux combines with lv and lv want revenge for snape taking wats his, annd horcrux doing harry in his sleep/mindscape :p |
 Jingy5 2009-06-16 . chapter 1lol lol lol hey i'm not laughing for the fic.. it was great but not hahaha funny i'm laughing because i would so do Snape before even the thought of James could come to mind lol |
 BOOMrobotdog 2009-06-16 . chapter 1I have to admit, I skimmed it. Rape and SS/HP are not likes of mine. I have to always replace "Severus" with "Lucius" when I read those stories to make them fun. Otherwise, they are just bad. Funny though, I used to love Snarry... Like in 2005. On that note, I would like to read a evil!Harry sequel, bwahahaha. I love that last sentence.
and I find it interesting that you mention The Abyss but don't mention WHAT kind of a story it is? Strange. I know because of the emails, but would others? |
 Wasabi Sauce 2009-06-16 . chapter 1My word. I am completely and totally blown away by your genius, I think you put out my eye, with that shine that is coming off the top of your head. This story is utterly amazing. |
 Chocola Emo Shizzle 2009-06-15 . chapter 1** yes I'd have sex with Snape first! :D! He is one SEXY Wizard! :] And I like how you wrote this. |
 vairetwilight 2009-06-15 . chapter 1Oh wow that was slightly disturbing and creepy. Though really I agree I would so do Snape before James. Its interesting to see how you portrayed Harry's emotions changing with Voldemort's influence - it would be interesting to see what the Horcrux's revenge would be like :)
You can keep the Miley Cyrus tickets - I'd prefer death and eternal servitude in Hell. |