great work on the story

you had me laughing with the unexpected pairing. good job

kira is so cute!!

WHAT! Hot DAMN! Omg I would not have seen THAT coming! Wow Kira lower your standers much?

I liked it! At first I was puzzled on how to react but in the end I LIKED it!! It was so bizare but some how believable. I thought it was funny how Kira was just like "okay...whatever.." and Jona was all for it! Haha. It was original and crazy and a little but disturbing, an instant classic in my opinion! Stories like this keep things fresh and lively and I'm glad I got a chance to read it.

You.Are. Fantastic.
Keep up the good work.