pretty good i enjoyed it.

Awesome fic, great indeed. A bit short, but I've seen worse as far as that goes. And you even had a sensible epilogue (I'm starting to think everyone but JKR can write something half-way decent). Cheers mate, great fic.

This was a lovely story, and so well done!

I don't know how much fun it was to write, but it definitely was a delight to read. I love the story, especially how the events are described through Luna's point of view. And not to forget, the special bond between Ri and Ro.

Absolutely delightful. I loved reading something from Luna's perspective and not having it turn into one grand run-on joke of stupidity. I would love to read a sequal.

story is totally bice! i'm adding it to my C2

So weirdly unique. With the air of a fairy tale. I especially like the engagement between Luna and Draco. How wonderfully simplistic. Of old rituals so convoluted as to be forgotten why. Who's to say what's fact from fiction.

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JACKALOPE

This is awesome! I love how it's all from Luna's point of view. Just a question, is Remus dead? I wished he didn't in the last book, but he did. I hope he isn't here. Then again, it's not important.

Yay! I never thought that was how the belief thing worked. I kinda like it. I'm so happy Hermione finally half-ly believes. But didn't she not believe in Jackalopes, than how could she see Benji?

Lovely -- just lovely.

--"Then I have a proposition that will ensure your family's safety if Harry does and mine if he doesn't," she went on quickly and precisely. "If you propose to me with one token which I return at the ceremony or else the betrothal is cancelled. From the vault of the Malfoy matriarch's family, if you don't mind, as that would be who I would become."-

lol, well written. i love the idea of two harry's!! YAY!
but i had to read that line (the one above) multiple times before i was for sure waht it was talking about. lol
just shows you how great a reader i am. =)
nice job!! YAY!

this was a nice story

It's a fun story. Thanks!

Sorry, I was away and was only just able to read it. Loved the epilogue. Luna's interaction with Hermione in the end (not to mention the inclusion of Rolf- who I have liked without meeting lol) and the need for the twins to pre-approve. Wonderful story!

good story, keep up the good work, byes

I greatly enjoyed your story. Sure, I thought Luna was a little too perfect, knowing exactly what the twins needed without asking, but if you had added a whole "path to discovery," the story would have been much longer; and I liked the fact I could read it all in one sitting.

Thank you very much.

-NB