So glad to see more of this...I can't really describe to you how it's all unfolding in my mind. It's like a real story without the explicit depiction, I don't know who these people are, but I can imagine. The whole thing is delectably sordid and painful, like the tragedy of many lives in one, and only short. It's cruel that I can't know more about these episodes, that only you know the real story behind it...I like that, but it kills me.

OMG I SO LOVE IT coz you don't really say what is happening, but then you do, so i can imagine everything! and... anything at the same time, is so great!

I get the feeling here that you wrote this for yourself...if you know what I mean, it seems kind of pure, as opposed to heavily wrought with corrections and edits, like it just appeared as is out of your head. I like it, for it's obscurity, more for the fact that I still feel somewhat clueless everytime I come back here to read it. I really want to know more about the in-between times, the order of events, you really don't reveal an awful lot to us.


I say run with this further, see how dark and deep you can take it...keep it secret though. I never thought I ask for this but...Do you think you'd be able to keep us hanging here? Feed us more events...but keep the personal elements to yourself, for us to piece together.


I like a challenge. =D

OMG it was so great! i so love they way you write!! i've read more than once a lot of your stories!!