Nice. *****

I loved it but I think that you should have a part 2 and so on because this is a good story

i thought this was so adorable!

i wished this really happened.

marvel has seriously been putting of some laura and julian moments lately and its killing me!

Does Julian call all his girlfriends "beautiful"? I'm glad his old gf is gone...she was SUCH a boring character. X-23 is so interesting. She was so upset when Surge did her selfish bit to make David mad. I do like how Mercury and Dust have become good friends with x23. Anyways, thanks for sharing this! I love how the arrogant Hellion has feelings for the girl that scares him the most!

Wow, this. is. amazing. Take that Sofia! *karate chops thet tabel, breaks the table and possibly my hand and slowly backs away.* :)

I Like It !

do Other CHapters!

Aww...Cute! That's all I have to say! Great job!

This is a really good story. I'm especially impressed that you kept both of them completely in character (lots of people screw that up entirely). Cute story, and one of the best pairings in X-Men history. Keep it up!

Um...

Great story...

'Til you got to the tongue thing...

Weird!

Best story for one of my fav pairings I've read yet!

Aw loved it! there needs to be ore x-23 fics!

Aw, that was really cute.

Hey thanks for the great story, I added it to the community "Designation: X-23". If you are interested, you can join a few other dedicated X-23 fan forum. helix23 . myfreeforum . org

Good luck, mayhaps we'll be hearing from you soon?

I thought it was a well done story and instant fav

nice one shot an i faved both of your stories make ore helix stories